{"id":55,"date":"2007-08-27T23:00:40","date_gmt":"2007-08-27T23:00:40","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/?p=55"},"modified":"2021-07-07T10:26:43","modified_gmt":"2021-07-07T15:26:43","slug":"spacing-with-dialogue","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/effective-writing\/spacing-with-dialogue\/","title":{"rendered":"Dialogue Writing Tips"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>The most common way to indicate a new speaker&#8217;s dialogue is to start a new paragraph.<\/p>\n<p>Here is an example from my novel <em>Touched<\/em>:<\/p>\n<p>Rashan slouched into a nearby folding chair, not bothering to get one for Georgia. He moved a few braids from his forehead, but they fell back over his eyes. After a silence, Georgia, still standing, took the conversational lead. \u201cSo you\u2019re a basketball player?\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cVarsity. Point guard.\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cGreat.\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cDo you know what a point guard is?\u201d<br \/>\n\u201cNot exactly but it sounds important.\u201d<br \/>\nRashan laughed. \u201cIt is. Hey, you wanna dance?\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Different speakers&#8217; words may be written in a single paragraph to save space as long as the change of speakers is clear by prompts to the reader such as <em>Rashan laughed<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>Single words such as <em>yes, no, where, how,<\/em> and <em>why<\/em> are not enclosed in quotation marks unless used in direct dialogue.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Examples:<\/strong><br \/>\n<em>She said yes when he asked her to marry him.<\/em><br \/>\n<em>When Howard asked Mary to marry him, she shouted, &#8220;Yes!&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<p>With thoughts and imagined dialogue that are unspoken, you may enclose the interior discourse in quotation marks or not.<br \/>\n<strong><br \/>\nExamples:<\/strong><br \/>\n<em>\u201cIf he asks for chocolate ice cream one more time,\u201d Benny\u2019s mother thought, \u201cI\u2019ll scream.&#8221;<\/em><br \/>\n<em>If he asks for chocolate ice cream one more time, Benny\u2019s mother thought, I\u2019ll scream.<\/em><br \/>\n<em>\u201cWhy,\u201d she wondered, \u201cdid I worry about the test so much?\u201d<br \/>\nWhy, she wondered, did I worry about the test so much?<\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The most common way to indicate a new speaker&#8217;s dialogue is to start a new paragraph. Here is an example from my novel Touched: Rashan slouched into a nearby folding chair, not bothering to get one for Georgia. He moved a few braids from his forehead, but they fell back over his eyes. After a [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_acf_changed":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[12],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-55","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-effective-writing"],"acf":[],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/55"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=55"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/55\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":5150,"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/55\/revisions\/5150"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=55"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=55"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=55"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}