{"id":3229,"date":"2019-07-23T23:00:42","date_gmt":"2019-07-24T05:00:42","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/?p=3229"},"modified":"2020-12-09T16:30:45","modified_gmt":"2020-12-09T22:30:45","slug":"drawing-the-subject-out-of-hiding","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.grammarbook.com\/blog\/verbs\/drawing-the-subject-out-of-hiding\/","title":{"rendered":"Drawing the Subject Out of Hiding"},"content":{"rendered":"

We typically know what a sentence subject is and where to find it:<\/p>\n

Mary<\/u> baked the cake.<\/em>
\nThe train<\/u> left on time.<\/em>
\nBaseball games<\/u> are long.<\/em><\/p>\n

Those with a keen eye\u2014as well as those who have read our rules on subject-verb agreement<\/a>\u2014will also spot the subjects in the following sentences (and understand why the verbs are singular or plural). That includes subjects that can be sneaky:<\/p>\n

The group<\/u> of players is<\/u> boarding the bus.<\/em>
\nMy sister<\/u> or my brother<\/u> runs<\/u> the store whenever Dad has the day off.<\/em>
\nEither the plates<\/u> or the platter<\/u> has<\/u> to go in that box.<\/em>
\nSurf and turf<\/u> is<\/u> my favorite meal.<\/em>
\nGreed<\/u>, as well as pride, often leads<\/u> to conflict.<\/em><\/p>\n

At other times, sentences might include information with even less obvious subjects that lead us off our grammatical trails.<\/p>\n

For example, what are the subjects in the following sentences?\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n

Foods fortified with vitamin B12 or a B12 supplement [need\/needs] to be consumed by those following a strict plant-based diet without any animal products. <\/em>(one subject, foods, <\/em>or two subjects, foods, B12 supplement?<\/em>)<\/p>\n

Muscle gained with regular weight training and a protein diet [contribute\/contributes] to a leaner and stronger physique. <\/em>(one subject, muscle, <\/em>or two subjects, muscle, protein diet?<\/em>)\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n

The thought of shopping or relaxation by the pool [make\/makes] Juanetta happy. <\/em>(one subject, thought, <\/em>or two subjects, thought, relaxation?<\/em>)\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n

You might never know the answer unless you have access to the writer. We can serve our audience by revising such sentences before releasing them to be read.<\/p>\n

One quick fix is to be clearer with our prepositional phrases:<\/p>\n

Foods<\/u> fortified with<\/span> vitamin B12 or by<\/span><\/em> a B12 supplement need<\/u> to be consumed by those following a strict plant-based diet without any animal products. <\/em>(one plural subject modified by two prepositional phrases; plural verb)<\/p>\n

Muscle<\/u> gained with<\/span> regular weight training and with<\/span> a protein diet contributes<\/u> to a leaner and stronger physique. <\/em>(singular subject modified by two prepositional phrases; singular verb)<\/p>\n

The thought<\/u> of<\/span> shopping or of<\/span> relaxation by the pool makes<\/u> Juanetta happy. <\/em>(singular subject modified by two prepositional phrases; singular verb)<\/p>\n

Another solution is to apply an “either\u2026or” or “both\u2026and” construction after the preposition:<\/p>\n

Foods<\/u> fortified with either<\/span> vitamin B12 or<\/span> <\/em>a B12 supplement need<\/u> to be consumed by those following a strict plant-based diet without any animal products. <\/em>(one plural subject modified by one prepositional phrase with two objects; plural verb)\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n

Muscle<\/u> gained with both<\/span> regular weight training and<\/span> a protein diet contributes<\/u> to a leaner and stronger physique. <\/em>(singular subject modified by one prepositional phrase with two objects; singular verb)\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n

The thought<\/u> of either<\/span> shopping or<\/span> relaxation by the pool makes<\/u> Juanetta happy.<\/em> (singular subject modified by one prepositional phrase with two objects; singular verb)<\/p>\n

If our goal is to have a compound subject (two separate ideas), a third solution for our last sentence above would be to reverse the position of the elements causing confusion about the subject(s) and the number of the verb:<\/p>\n

Relaxation<\/u> by the pool and<\/span> the thought<\/u> of shopping make<\/u> Juanetta happy.<\/em>
\nRelaxation<\/u> by the pool or<\/span> the thought<\/u> of shopping makes<\/u> Juanetta happy.<\/em><\/p>\n

As mindful writers, we want to compose content that doesn’t make our readers work to understand it. Ensuring our sentence subjects are clear helps keep the wind in the sails of our stories.<\/p>\n

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Pop Quiz<\/h2>\n

Using what you’ve learned in this article, how would you further clarify the subject(s) in each sentence? Also select the verb that agrees with your sentence subject.<\/p>\n

1. A hot dog with chips and a beer [make\/makes] baseball games more fun.<\/p>\n

2. Studying with books or an online tutorial [help\/helps] prepare you for the exam.<\/p>\n

3. This evening, dreams of sugarplums or a candy rainbow [is\/are] filling the children’s heads.<\/p>\n

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Pop Quiz Answers<\/h3>\n

The following are some suggested revisions. You may come up with others.<\/p>\n

1. A hot dog with both chips and a beer makes baseball games more fun.
\nA beer and a hot dog with chips make baseball games more fun.<\/p>\n

2. Studying with books or with an online tutorial helps prepare you for the exam.
\nStudying with either books or an online tutorial helps prepare you for the exam.
\nAn online tutorial or studying with books helps prepare you for the exam.
\nAn online tutorial and studying with books help prepare you for the exam.<\/p>\n

3. This evening, dreams of sugarplums or of a candy rainbow are filling the children’s heads.
\nThis evening, dreams of both sugarplums and a candy rainbow are filling the children’s heads.
\nThis evening, a candy rainbow and dreams of sugarplums are filling the children’s heads.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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